Fic: Fixing what's wrong | Michael Scofield/Lincoln Burrows | R

[nea]

Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Lincoln Burrows
Author: freaky_nea
Rating: R (because of that brother thing)
Author's note: Completely AU somewhere from season 3 on.
Author's note 2: Awesomely betaed by epidemically
Warnings: Written because Michael was pissing me off in episode 306, again.
Disclaimer: I would treat them better, if they were mine.
Title: Fixing what's wrong

Comments

[elandae.livejournal.com]

Aw, jealous!Michael... totally makes me feel kinda bad for him. (even if he did bring it on himself with all that Dr. Boring BS ;) ) But the end is so totally sweet and just aww! Silly misunderstandings. *clucks tongue and pushes them together*

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Aww, thank you! Writing that was kind of therapeutic. And I felt a bit sorry for Michael, too, actually, but on the other heand, he deserved it...

It was supposed to be more funny but it turned out differently. I'm just their tool and they use me... But I'm strangly fine with it...

I'm glad you liked it *hugs*

[elandae.livejournal.com]

He did but it looks like Linc is going to make him feel better so it all balances out in the end. (lol ironic that I used the phrase 'in the end' in this setting ;) )

I find it hard to imagine anyone being alright with being used by three ridiculously gorgeous and sexy men. lol Incomprehensible! But I think it turned out really well this way, you make Michael squirm a little and I think that's somethign we can all enjoy. lol

*hugsback*

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Linc is a way better person than I am. I bet he forgives Mike his bitching instantly, because he is awesome like that.

Besides, I love squirmy freaked out Michael and when it ends up with kissing Lincoln I love it even more.

[elandae.livejournal.com]

Maybe he doesn't really forgive his whining instantly but makes Michael make it up to him sooome way. ;)

Freaked out Michael is definitely quite adorable! And if it ends up that way, then it deeefinitely that much better.

[tuesdaeschild.livejournal.com]

Jealous!Michael is adorable!! Yes, he did get a little carried away with the het thing while in Sona...here he's thinking much more rationally (well, except for the irrational jealousy of Sucre, obviously!) and the resultant closeness at the end was divinely delicious!!

Very, very nice, sweetheart!

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Michael and het is so out of character for me. I mean I understand that he had to pretend in season one but later on it was just useless...

"Divinely delicious closeness" just made my day! Thank you for reading and commenting.

[tuesdaeschild.livejournal.com]

Maybe he just got caught up in the pretense and found it hard to drop the act? :)

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Yes, probably. That would be very Michael-ish, though.

[tuesdaeschild.livejournal.com]

Mystery solved then! :)

But yes, very Michael-ish!

[amodalie.livejournal.com]

Hee, jealous!Michael! How sweet!

I have to admit I understand his bitching about in Sona, under those circumstances anyone's nerves would be on fire. The Sara-thing, well... yeah, he just didn't find the right words then.

Ah, silly Michael you! Sucre and Linc? No.Way. But that's him, he can't help worrying about everything, can he? Now that he has his brother back it won't be long til he's just happy Linc and Sucre get along so well.

So, nice fic!

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I just couldn't resist to make him a little jealous because he really deserved it

And you are right of course: Sona would freak everyone/anyone out, it's just hell, but still... this whole Tancredi plot was only believable in the first season if ever, and all this dramatic moarning about her seemed so... fake to me...

*lol* I wouldn't slash Michael or Lincoln with other people. I'm that kind of OTP person in a fandom, though I love Sucre to pieces. Sucre and his devotion to Maricruz <3

Thanks for reading and commenting! *hugs*

[amodalie.livejournal.com]

"I wouldn't slash Michael or Lincoln with other people."

Yeah, but Michael doesn't know that! *lol* He absolutely deserved being jealous! Sucre is a good-looking guy, after all.

I know you hate her, but... part of me really likes Sara, cause she's a woman with balls, not girlish at all. But, and here we agree, her plotline was at some point written and acted out badly - and I do not mean HER acting - and it wasn't believable any more. I hated Michael's exaggerated "Sara"-moaning, even Linc did it at one time. This was so "look, folks, we are grieving!"

Know what's funny? I didn't like S3 too much when I watched it the first time. Now, after what's going on in S4... well... let's just say, Sona had its moments ;-)

And we slashers are particularly good at concentrating on the "right moments" (and building whole worlds upon them) while ignoring certain other ones, nicht wahr? *grins*

*hugs back*