Fic: Sucre | Michael Scofield/Lincoln Burrows | R

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Author: freaky_nea
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Lincoln Burrows (and a special appereance of the Sucre family.)
Rating: R (for the subject in general)
Author's note: Once more all credits go to epidemically who is awesome.
Author's note 2: For lindtti who wanted to see it posted.
Disclaimer: Michael and Lincoln, Sucre, Maricruz and even the baby belong to Paul T. Scheuring (even though he doesn't deserve them) but this fic is all mine.
Title: Sucre

Comments

[amodalie.livejournal.com]

*pats Maricruz on the shoulder for her true words*

Jep, this fits. Sucre, being confused, being unsure, searching help in his religion first, then calling his girl. And, as a real woman, she soothes him with simple wisdon and understanding. Yay! That's it!

*lol* really had to laugh at your disclaimer! Kind of right, I think...

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

I just adore Fernando and Maricruz together. They are such cuties and it was so much fun to write this. And honestly, I can't imagine Fernando not being loyal to the brothersr. No matter what.

And I'm really glad you liked it and commented! ♥

And the disclaimer: yeah, I'm pretty pissed at Mr. Scheuring. Now more than ever.

[elandae.livejournal.com]

The way the scene is set right at the start is great, I can just see it taking place in my head! I love that Sucre specifically wants her to sing the lullaby that his mom sang to him when he was young. So sweet!

He can't tell her, that he walked into Michael and Lincoln kissing a few minutes ago.

lol I would tell eeeveryone. "HEY EVERYONE, COME SEE THE HOTTEST THING EVER!" Seriously though, the description of them together and the way they're kissing? Oh guh. It's so soft and lovely and beautiful.

And he really don't want to have a pissed off Lincoln Burrows against him.

I wouldn't want to piss opff Linc either. That being said, I would like to see a pissed off Linc literally against Sucre. lol

And Sucre's conclusion at the end is very sweet. And very Sucre cause you know he'd come round to anything in the end cause he's just this big adorable ball of sweet loveliness.

This is really, really lovely. You balance very well being sweet without being saccharine and that's not something that many writers can achieve.

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

The scene from season one where Sucre is singing while Mike is breaking the bricks in the wall is just one of the bestest scenes in TV history for me. I can so see him singing for the baby. Or singing/humming in general when he feels good. Because he is adorable like that.

I don't know if I would tell everyone but I would definitely take pictures. And watch them over and over and over and over again. Oh yeah...

Saying that it was well balanced and in character is the biggest compliment you can make me, because I have never written Sucre before and because I always fear that it's just too much fluff/sweetness for other people, so you made my week with that, really. ♥

[elandae.livejournal.com]

OMG, I had totally forgotten about that. I don't know how cause I totally agree, it's just the most adorable scene. The way he just totally goes for it is so freaking cute, I just want to give him a huge sack if puppies. LOL

True, true. There would deeefinitely be some very intense and probably quite creepy string on my part to be certain. (lol I totally just had this mental image of being just like frozen staring at them until they finally get weirded out and just throw a dropcloth over me or something ;) )

Aww, well I'm totally glad then! I always worry about staying in character too... it's such a fretful thing when you're writing, isn't it?

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Michael and Sucre are such puppies together. Actually I'm half expecting Maricruz and Lincoln and the rest of the guys that are around them to develop diabetes. They are just best friends for life. Yet, there's still no way to slash them for me. Because everyone needs a best friend he is not fucking around with...

Like a statue? *giggles* Paralyzed by the hottness of mike and Linc... What a way to go.

Yes, staying in character is the hardest but at the same time the best thing. But I guess that's why I'm writing fanfics and not originals. I love to let the characters do what I have in mind, but still be themselves, you know what I mean?

[elandae.livejournal.com]

They really are... I always thought they were kinda like brothers. Not brothers in the sense of Mike and Linc, cleaaaarly. LOL But they totally have that sort of quality to me. I was saying the other day that after Linc, Michael would always be looking out for Sucre next.

Plus, the fun of already established characters is that there's already a world created for you and you can draw from that sometimes. It can work for and against, I think.

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

Maybe Sucre and Michael are what Lincoln and Michael should be, but can't, because passion and intensity won't let them...

[elandae.livejournal.com]

Yeah... Sucre can be the brother that Linc can't be cause he's too busy having ridiculously hot sex with Michael. lol

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

*ggg* EXACTLY!

[elandae.livejournal.com]

And hello to your pretty icon of prettiness! lol

[freaky-nea.livejournal.com]

I had to steal it from someone, because OMG the way Mike looks at him? LOVE! And oh so pritti!

[elandae.livejournal.com]

He's being (as always!) inteeeense. His forte. lol